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This proposal offers a wide array of sustainability-focused actions, but they are not sufficiently tailored to the campus' situation and needs.
Although most of the initiatives proposed are already under consideration by MIT in-house initiatives, this proposal is well-written and has a clear plan for implementation.
Going forward, the proposal should be revised to explain the actions, and more closely relate different aspects of the proposal to MIT (e.g. budget, facilities, etc.). For example, how exactly would you propose that MIT build awareness? Could the actions proposed be ordered such that the more feasible actions are conducted first to build momentum on campus? What would a more accurate estimate of costs include?
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