Writing Climate Change Back into History by mariahalyna

Hello Maria, Thanks for your proposal to the Climate CoLab. I'm one of the catalysts, helping provide comments and feedback, in an effort to help strengthen proposals. Thank you for sharing your proposal for this collective of biographies and narratives about conservationists. This is an interesting concept, telling of personal histories, successes, and lessons-learned within the climate movement. I think this idea holds promise. A few brief suggestions for your piece: A) You might explore some different phrasing for your "pitch." I think it would help to clearly articulate in the pitch that this idea is about creating a collective of biographies. It's not entirely self-evident what the proposal is about the way its currently written. B) Similarly, for the summary section, its not until the third paragraph that the core proposal idea is introduced. Perhaps there's a way to communicate the idea in the first few sentences, so people understand where you're headed right off the bat. C) If the Wordpress site has launched, you might include a link to it in the proposal text. Thanks for your contribution.