Greenery promotion and pollution reduction in air and water. by nottynine99

Please find below the judging results for your proposal.

Semi-Finalist Evaluation

Judges'' comments

Proposal: Greenery promotion and pollution reduction in air and water. Contest: U.S. Government 2014 Thank you for your contest entry, Greenery promotion and pollution reduction in air and water.. We appreciate your willingness to share your ideas, and also the time and effort you put into developing a proposal and submitting it to the
. As your entry did not sufficiently address some of the revisions the Judges were hoping to see, we did not advance it to the next round of competition. We encourage you to keep developing your idea. Transfer your proposal to a Workspace to re-open it, make edits, add collaborators, and even submit it into a future contest. You can do so by logging into your account, opening your proposal, selecting the Admin tab, and clicking “Move proposal.” We welcome you to stay involved in the Climate CoLab community: support and comment on proposals that have been named Finalists, and vote during the public voting period to help select the contest’s Popular Choice Winner. Climate CoLab will be opening more contests throughout the year and you are welcome to submit your proposal to those contests as well. Keep up the great work. We hope that by working together, we all can create solutions that wouldn’t otherwise be possible. Sincerely, Contest Fellows If there are additional comments from the Judges & Fellows, they will be included below.

We think there's a bunch of really good ideas in this proposal. In fact, that contributes to the reason we can't advance your proposal as it's currently written. There are over ten novel ideas for how to clean up the environment and help mitigate climate change in the summary, but several of the remaining sections are incomplete.

We encourage you to pick one or a few of the ideas and describe how an actor (government agency or not) would implement the idea, overcome opposition to the idea, and effect an outcome. If you do this, we definitely think you should resubmit it to the next Climate CoLab contest.

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