Aug 20, 2014
Proposal somewhat difficult to understand. What concrete actions are being advocated? Proposal makes statements on results and benefits without really explaining how they would achieved. Basis for selecting sub-proposals was not clear. Proposes everything as it is claimed the proposal is universal. It would perhaps have been better to focus on a few subproposals with clear links between them and the primary proposal. Author despises models, so the analytical basis behind the proposal overall comes into question.